“people used to consider doing good deeds without giving one’s name is a kind of virtue, but things are different now.
they insist that Lei Feng, a kind-hearted people who gave us a history of virtues
总体来说句子通顺，语法错误也不多，错的我用大的字体纠正了 ～
但是论述不是很详细
结尾句太短可以加一两句～
一眼扫过,你整篇没有什么高级词汇,没有亮点句,阅卷老师的分就不会高
而且,没有突出英语写作水平的长句
详细的就不说了,晚安~
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